Those eyes...
i dont look into...
tell a story every time i steal a look...
and it hurts to think it is true...
a hundred dreams..
a thousand wishes..
only to be remembered..
or..maybe forgotten too..
everything can't be completed..
that's what the world teaches..
dreams..
become wishes..
wishes..
become memories..
and..memories..
become..LIFE!
About Me
- Pooja Murthy
- "The woods are lovely, dark, and deep, But I have promises to keep, And miles to go before I sleep, And miles to go before I sleep." ~Robert Frost
9 comments:
just too good chotti,.,esp the last three lines,.,awesome !!
very well written.. keep up the good work... abe itne time baat poem likhi hai koi... sahi hai... keep on writing!!..
kya baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat hai!!!!
great work yaar..some serious thought put into the work....spell bounding...
keep it up!!!
cheers!
wah waaah... kya baat hai....
@everyone: thankyou for appreciating all the time! it really encourages me to write more and more and more!
@nikhil: thankyou! keep reading! :)
it takes a lot of time to comment on ur poems..u tells a lot of things..a lot..u writes ur emotions so well..and the title too is brilliant..it aint a praise..i hav been reading all ur poems..all are great..i admire!:)
@navneet : whoa! seems like you have deeply analysed the poem! thanks! *smile*
I didnt know that you wrote so well..
Keep dishing out such beautiful poems..
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